At a glance pg 174 - Revising my research paper

When revising my research paper, the first thing i did was read it aloud.  This made it easier to pick out my mistakes because I could hear what I was saying rather than just reading it silently. As I was revising my paper, I was able to detect some run-on sentences that didn't sound as well and I also repeated myself a good bit throughout the paper.  I used feedback that some of my peers gave me to help better my paper.  My conclusion was definitely shortest in my paper just because I was tired and wrapping everything up but when revising, I was able to go back and make sure that the conclusion was one of my strongest paragraphs so that my paper ended on a high note.  I also caught a lot of silly mistakes that I had made when I was reviewing my paper.  Several times, I had left out commas or made silly grammatical errors that I didn't realize when writing the paper.  Altogether, after some of the feedback I have received and from self-editing my paper after a few days has passed, I already feel like my paper is much better.